My teaser this week is a departure from my on going series LUST IN BATTLE, which will return next week with Part 3.
Today I offer you A Promise to Keep. I hope you enjoy reading it.
A Promise to Keep
Don Abdul © 2012
Squinting, Sharon looked out the open window of her living room. It was futile; she could barely see that far with her one good eye. Shiver with excitement, she recalled her Master’s promise to her during their last chat.
“I’ll come see you next month,” his tone seductively deep tone had left her moist and needy.
Sharon had been feeling rather low since her life saving surgery was scheduled, but now as she prepared to welcome Him to her home, the darkness that had descended upon her since learning she might lose her sight completely was suddenly lifted.
Struggling with her bashful nature and the embarrassment of being exposed so intimately to another woman, Sharon had resigned herself to getting her pubes waxed as her Master had instructed.
The pretty masseuse had poured warm oil on Sharon’s flaming bald skin, massaging it in the most intimate sensual caress, causing her body to betray her. Her labia became swollen with desire and her nipples hardened until they threatened to pop as waves of pleasure rippled through her entire existence.
Sharon’s engorged clitoris peeked from under its hood and every stroke of the masseuse’s gentle hands sent her sex quivering until her overheated core began to melt. The juices of her arousal could no longer be concealed; her dripping wet sex was pleading to be touched.
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That's my piece for the week folks. If you enjoyed reading my Teaser, please check out my fellow authors too:
Naomi Shaw: http://naomisfantasies.wordpress.com
Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/
Cg Brumby: http://cgbrumby.blogspot.com.au/p/tantalizing-tuesdays.html
Don Abdul: http://don-abdul.blogspot.com
Molly Synthia: http://mollysynthia.com
Sherry M. Palmer: http://michellechatton.blogspot.com
Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.com
Dianne Hartsock: http://diannehartsock.wordpress.com/tantalizing-tuesday-2/
Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.com
Veronica Fredricks: http://authorveronicafredricks.blogspot.com
Angelica Dawson: http://angelicadawson.blogspot.com
Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/
ER Pierce http://www.erpierce.com
Today I offer you A Promise to Keep. I hope you enjoy reading it.
A Promise to Keep
Don Abdul © 2012
Squinting, Sharon looked out the open window of her living room. It was futile; she could barely see that far with her one good eye. Shiver with excitement, she recalled her Master’s promise to her during their last chat.
“I’ll come see you next month,” his tone seductively deep tone had left her moist and needy.
Sharon had been feeling rather low since her life saving surgery was scheduled, but now as she prepared to welcome Him to her home, the darkness that had descended upon her since learning she might lose her sight completely was suddenly lifted.
Struggling with her bashful nature and the embarrassment of being exposed so intimately to another woman, Sharon had resigned herself to getting her pubes waxed as her Master had instructed.
The pretty masseuse had poured warm oil on Sharon’s flaming bald skin, massaging it in the most intimate sensual caress, causing her body to betray her. Her labia became swollen with desire and her nipples hardened until they threatened to pop as waves of pleasure rippled through her entire existence.
Sharon’s engorged clitoris peeked from under its hood and every stroke of the masseuse’s gentle hands sent her sex quivering until her overheated core began to melt. The juices of her arousal could no longer be concealed; her dripping wet sex was pleading to be touched.
***
That's my piece for the week folks. If you enjoyed reading my Teaser, please check out my fellow authors too:
Naomi Shaw: http://naomisfantasies.wordpress.com
Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/
Cg Brumby: http://cgbrumby.blogspot.com.au/p/tantalizing-tuesdays.html
Don Abdul: http://don-abdul.blogspot.com
Molly Synthia: http://mollysynthia.com
Sherry M. Palmer: http://michellechatton.blogspot.com
Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.com
Dianne Hartsock: http://diannehartsock.wordpress.com/tantalizing-tuesday-2/
Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.com
Veronica Fredricks: http://authorveronicafredricks.blogspot.com
Angelica Dawson: http://angelicadawson.blogspot.com
Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/
ER Pierce http://www.erpierce.com
Very nice, and I especially enjoyed the beautiful line "the darkness that had descended upon her since learning she might lose her sight completely..." The way you have metaphorical darkness describe her fear of actual permanent darkness...nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation of the essence of the teaser Molly. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it :)
DeleteFrom serious to sensual and hot. That's a lot to cover in 200wds. Nicely done! Wonder if she'll tell Master about the last bit, though...
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed quite a journey of emotion and arousal. Fitting it all into the space of 200 words was no mean feat, but it could be done and this is it. LOL
DeleteMaybe her Master is naughty enough to figure it out somehow, we'll see how it pans out hopefully ;)
Thanks for stopping by Dianne.
Great teaser done the build up was perfect
ReplyDeleteThanks for the thumbs up Julez.
DeleteI wanted more, much more. Excellent build up. Loved it
ReplyDeleteIn that case Naomi, I believe you have been tantalizingly teased ;)
DeleteCheers!
Kali Maddox:
ReplyDelete"*Sighs* I wish I could figure out why WordPress or Blogger won't let me post to your page directly, but I shall continue to post my comments here to show you some love :-)
Fantastic FF post, Don! I've seen this idea of a masseuse providing such delicate and complete care of a woman's body after 'service', soothing away her pain and more lusty needs. I think I'm being *robbed*! My place usually just gives me the oils to apply to myself - Although I must admit that there are a couple of techs there that I'd love to have do it for me *Mutters something about 'stupid professionalism robbing me of my happy ending'* ;-)
I love that you provided us a glimpse of her darker back story and the importance of this meeting to her. You have a seductive way of pulling your readers into the scene and leave us drooling for more!
Bravo, Sir! *Wicked Grin* ♥"
Thanks for your kind comments Kali. I appreciate your yearning for more even as I wish you goodluck in your quest to find the purr-fect waxing spa. LOL
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ReplyDeleteSharon Pearson 19 June 16:49
This one lets the imgination takes over and has an air of mystery to it. I would like to see where this one goes.
Thanks for the thumbs up Sharon... watch this space for more...
DeleteHmmm an interesting diversion from the Master to the Masseuse.
ReplyDeleteVery true Angelica, what an awesome way to manage the anxiety of Masters imminent visit too... Wonder if she can keep that little indiscretion from Him though ;)
DeleteA naughty, lust-filled entry, Don. Nice :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the thumbs up Cg. Glad you like it too.
DeleteGreat teaser! I love the range of emotion in this post.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind comment Venus :)
DeleteWonder if that waxer is taking appointments? Fantastic post.
ReplyDeleteI can ask Sharon to find out for you btw. LOL
DeleteThanks for the nice feedback Veronica.
Who would have guessed a shave could be so much fun! Wonderfull TTT, so very descriptive.
ReplyDeleteSpot on Cyril. This is exactly why i love being a writer, taking a mundane thing and turning it into a pot of gold ;)
DeleteGlad you enjoyed the teaser.
Excellant as usual! You always have a way of making me just as wet as the masseuse made her. I have never had a wax there but hey even after a shave, it would be very nice. I wonder what the Master will say if she tells him. I love your words and always feel your passion. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sensual Lady. I see some form of disclosure in her future. One way or another, the truth has a way of popping up at the most unexpected moment doesn't it? lol
DeleteGlad you enjoyed the teaser.
Well l get waxed 'there' every month and that's never happened to me! Must be going to the wrong place! Hot teaser!
ReplyDeleteEither that or maybe you need to get the name of that sexy masseuse from Sharon. lol
DeleteGlad you enjoyed the teaser Gemma, thanks.
Ouch is all I have to say. Those waxes hurt. I'd rather shave. Great post!
ReplyDeleteThe same goes for Sharon, but after that post wax extra service I bet she'll be going back for more. LOL
DeleteThanks for the thumbs up Bonni.
Oh boy! I'm not into women, but this snippet is hot!! she's going to be more then ready whe he Master will come!!!
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