Brought to Heel
Don Abdul ©2012
“Do you like that bitch?” The blow of Shaniqua’s paddle reverberated through the master bedroom of Alan’s up market city apartment. Her nipples were stiff and her tingling pussy moist from punishing her willful slave.
Whack! She paddled his sore bare buttocks whilst holding him down with her high heeled foot.
“Yes mistress. Please...” His excitement audible in his breathless plea.
“Please what, you worthless piece of shit?” Her tone was stern.
“More… gimme more… Harder.” His cock pushed at the front of his leather thong as his beautiful ebony Mistress spanked him harder.
Alan Prescott III was an arrogant bully and sole heir to a real estate empire who was feared by his employees. When he finally met his match in a pretty project development executive. She was fired after butting heads with Mr. Prescott one time too many, but not before kindling his secret passion.
In pursuit of his kinky passion, he courted his dominant ex-employee who brought him under her unforgiving hand.
Whack!!! “Beg for it bitch!
“Please Mistress… give it to me...”
Shaniqua strapped on her seven inch dildo and then ripped Alan’s thong off. Reaching around, She grabbed his steely cock and then rammed the silicon into his tight ass.
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That's my teaser for the week, I hope you've enjoyed reading it. Please remember to check out the following very talented authors too. Cheers!
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Love the power Mistress Shaniqua holds over him and that she didn't let him get away with anything in or out of the office. A hot turn of the table.
ReplyDeleteThanks S.J.
DeleteRight from the moment of her conception in my mind the character of Mistress Shaniqua was so compelling. I'm glad you like her as well.
Cheers!
"Brought to Heel" was definitely not a teaser, but more of a shocker. This is one lady who is definitely not to be messed with!
ReplyDeleteYou bang on the money Sharon, Mistress Shaniqua ain't one to mess with. She's a ball crusher. LOL
DeleteHugs
I love how you begin with the dialogue and then pursue the description of Alan. Vivid action that reads true to what really could happen.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the thumbs up Pablo.
DeleteI'm glad you enjoyed the teaser.
Oh wow, her power just smacks you as you read.This is a heavier teaser.
ReplyDeleteYes Savnnah, it is a rather bold deviation from my usual fascination with submissive women and dominant men. I find it refreshing that my male protagonist is a villain who found his match in the no nonsense Mistress Shaniqua.
DeleteGlad you enjoyed reading it.
Shocking and intense, she means business!
ReplyDeleteYeah Gemma, it does have a certain shock effect. She surely doesn't play when she kicks butt. LOL
DeleteThanks for the feedback dear.
Holy crap, Don, you write a good tease! Very intense. I wouldn't want to read a whole book of this, I find her language too abusive and hateful toward him. But that takes nothing away from your obvious talent.
ReplyDeleteI understand Dianne; Mr. Prescott apart from being a closet submissive also gets off on humiliation. That would explain her extreme language.
DeleteI'll keep your very valuable comment in mind if I should decided to take this story to the mainstream.
Cheers!
This is a great teaser. It has the shock effect and I agree with Dianne its best as a short tease. Would love to see other short teases of yours. Pretty please
ReplyDeleteThanks Naomi, have no fear, there'll be no serialization of Brought to Heel on TTT.
DeleteNext week will definitely bring a brand new teaser :)
Glad you enjoyed this one too b
FUCK That was red hot and brilliant
ReplyDeleteWhy thanks Julez *Taking a bow*
DeleteCheers!
Very good job! After the women subs and now the man sub, it was a shocker. I understand about the character being a badass and needing a strong woman to control him. Even with the humiliation, he likes it so...A very good deviant from your usual. :)
ReplyDeleteMy sentiments exactly. Thanks for the feedback Sensual Lady :)
DeleteI would read this. That is how you put a bully in his/her place. I want more in an eBook!
ReplyDeleteOne e-book coming right up ma'am. I've just gotta sort out the little matter of writing it first :)
DeleteCheers Sharon.
Wow very intense Teaser.
ReplyDeleteThank you Venus :)
DeleteThis was definately one hellava ro cker. She is certainly goes with the photo, Don! Bad, built and beautiful....a total badass! This is a tad brash for me, too, but this teaser is absolutly that...a great teaser. Great crafting, tempo, tension and development in such few words. Loved it:) xo
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you Muffy. I'm glad you git such a kick outta reading it like I did writing it too ;)
DeleteCheers!
Glad to read a fresh new tease from you, Don.
ReplyDeleteyour energy amazes me. I don't think I'd like to be either character though. This kind of story isn't something I normally read, but the balance of violence/justice matched the heat from the image. The language gives testimony to the intensity of the characters' frustration and emotion. Poetic expression is freedom to express oneself as an artist. You executed that perfectly. Great Job! :)
*Taking a bow with a wide smile on my face, and a naughty glint in my eyes*
DeleteWhy than you very much Cg. You're too kind :)
I wouldn't so much describe this as a deviation from your norm. No, I would label it a seven inch silicone...You get my drift *Wicked Grin*
ReplyDeleteI love how diverse you are with your writing. You can move from sweetly romantic to "OMG - Hot!" with ease.
I, for one, enjoyed how explicit and raw this piece was. I don't think that the role of FemDoms are explored enough in BDSM writing. As with male Doms, the severity of the encounter depends largely on the behavior of the Sub. The mutual satisfaction of the participants is the goal, as it is (or should be) with any sexual relationship.
Well done, sweets, as always :-) I look forward to your FF posts every week!
Why thank you very much for the thumbs up Kali *Blushing*
DeleteAlways a great pleasure to know someones wicked fantasies are fueled by my teasers.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Jade.