tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1989195638051225368.post7536888027694192222..comments2023-05-06T03:04:56.504-07:00Comments on Don Abdul: Heated Moment (Thursday Taster #1)Don Abdulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05412998446272616942noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1989195638051225368.post-26992207597984303972014-02-22T22:10:53.646-08:002014-02-22T22:10:53.646-08:00Wow! That's one intense scene...very well writ...Wow! That's one intense scene...very well written! Excellent dialogue. Can't wait to see what happens next! diannehartsockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15874628384426574320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1989195638051225368.post-49203760557072820762014-02-22T03:47:45.847-08:002014-02-22T03:47:45.847-08:00Well we can all see where this is going. Dialogue ...Well we can all see where this is going. Dialogue is a strength of yours, Don, and you use it here to blistering effect. The wife is terrifying and awesome.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1989195638051225368.post-70416236836306123582014-02-20T13:32:29.690-08:002014-02-20T13:32:29.690-08:00Very visceral dialogue. :)Very visceral dialogue. :)Rose Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04429566802562925080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1989195638051225368.post-76513128848747805962014-02-20T07:51:08.479-08:002014-02-20T07:51:08.479-08:00Awesome dialogue!
Awesome dialogue! <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11559515581305568500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1989195638051225368.post-78487991311659066862014-02-20T05:49:26.532-08:002014-02-20T05:49:26.532-08:00Welcome Don. Huge tension in this taster. I'd ...Welcome Don. Huge tension in this taster. I'd love to learn more about Frederick and his wife.Naomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1989195638051225368.post-16198562465973446892014-02-20T05:09:38.217-08:002014-02-20T05:09:38.217-08:00I like the way you brught this tense scene into se...I like the way you brught this tense scene into sexual arousal. Maybe Frederick is destined to become submissive to his wife in a dom/sub relationship. I like this taste of your WIP.. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11404100997386474731noreply@blogger.com